That was such a heroic story. I hope that Josephine was saved! Gret story. Keep on writting!

yes continue.. gripping and action packed. wow our 1st ficlet cliffhanger!

Some good writing here – I liked the suspense…

Wow. I agree with everyone here. 5 stars!

Lovely, very dramatic with good word choices. Looks like it came out while the rating system wasn’t working?
LoA