aww! yeah BB! tht must’ve been hard to do, but u did it!!! =]

This is, in fact, dire.

Why didn’t you make this a sequel of nr 1?
Story was okay. nice ending. But it kind of meanders a bit.

This was an awful long way to say “Hey guys, I found religion.”

As with the first part, this could have been a decent story had the spelling and grammar been better, and had you introduced the metaphor of “bags” in a way that didn’t leave us guessing at what you were referring to.

And this is just me nitpicking, but I feel that an ellipsis is best used sparingly.

Memoirs are well and good…at least when they are well-written memoirs. Your metaphor was nice, but in the first one it was a bit confusing, you know? Nice attempt, but it could’ve been better. Sorry if this sounds mean, but perhaps you can just let it go like one of the bags?