that is a cool story i can rly get the meaning of it i also lov to write ani ad i am 12 so check my stories

Alright. Watch your tenses, and I would experiment with point of view if I were you. Your sentences flow nicely…I’d like a bit more description, though. Dwell on the “it” that your character is running away from, maybe. Otherwise, nicely done. I will give four stars if ficlets lets me. They seem to be disabled lately.