I ENCOURAGE you to please learn to write before posting to more websites.

user 6481 please focus on other things, if you do not like the way I write then don’t read anything I write. I am sorry you feel the need to be rude.

Although I think that user 6481 is being a little harsh, she does have a point. Your stories seem as if you need to have a little more life experience before trying to write about the things you want to write about. You should find your own voice so that your writing doesn’t sound so cliche. Also, misspellings of basic words only take away from the depth and comprehension of your stories. Furthermore, your stories and ideas don’t flow very well. You have potential, but you also have a lot to learn.