Ohhhh such a sad story and unfortunately, that happens waaaaayy too often. I like the way you told it from the child’s view. I hope that this storyline continues. I can see several directions that it could take. It will be interesting to watch. Great job!

It will be continued, but like judee4u2 said, theres several possible directions. It may take a while to decide the best choice.

Oh, LeAnn, that made me cry…I also loved how it was from Casey’s point of view—at first I was wondering why she wasn’t going to grow up. And how she’s sure her mother did it in her best interests…which I believe can be a typical response from abused children. This is absolutely amazing. I can’t wait to see where you take it!
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5 stars!

Wow, that was very emotional for me… Definitely a great but sad story. Very powerful! 5 Stars

omg this is good. the despair part is so huge but awesome