Ooh, I love it! You manage to pull off a surprising ending better than most that I’ve seen so far. Congrats on a nice piece!
wow a nice twist i like ,i would like to see it seueled or prequeled
Go for it :) This ficlet was a dream I had last night and I woke up after the headstones. Damnit.
Luisa Rose
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Melia
Melia