This is good and makes me want more!

I liked this as well. I finally added a bit to blizno’s sequel. Add some more about the guy

Very exciting and a bit of a twist. We have a character for a while, you assume that character will survive against all odds. I guess that’s part of the fun of ficlets—that the next author may not be as attached to a character. Keeps it real, I think. And great intro to a new character too.
LoA