Oh…oh…that’s so sad! Really, really sad! Aww…don’t let him die! Please!
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5 stars

Following Wallflower’s lead with a story told from the 2nd person POV . Such an interesting perspective – we’re so used to hearing that POV in commercials, that it sounds so strange as a ficlet. But a fun exercise…

Hello, Yoda. Don’t ask me why, but I went and did a sequel. Yours was a rightfully dark depiction of addiction. I think I lurched dangerously close to cheesy in mine.

Great Job Yoda!

aww how sad please don’t let him die
he can’t not yet it’s christmas!
very good writting through!