Wow… Just… Wow! I have no other words.

wowzers… that’s beautiful…

So beautifully written, and the title is just perfect. I wish I could rate this. 5 stars definitely.

Nice. I like your writing style. You manage to paint a clear detailed picture, that is very descriptive and easy to read.

Lovely, lovely…I had no idea of the priest being an old friend or acquaintance. Very nice pick up on what I threw in as a random line about the church having some significance. Quite a thoughtful little series we’ve wound up with.

LoA

i just wish mine could live up to yours and thx

Don’t sell yourself short, Tieggerstripn2 – your sequel inspired me to write this. After the sequel to this one, I’m stuck – maybe you can take it from there? Your descriptions of the addict were great.

Again, great. (I think I am going to need my thesaurus for this thread)

This has a very poetic sound to it.
Beautiful.

oh…was I not supposed to rate this?
Oh No!! ah! how do I take it back?
Did I just ruin whatever was being accomplished by no one rating it?
I AM SOO SORRY !

I love that!
so beautiful!

deep………had to read it twice to absorb it all.

Wow. I’m quite impressed. Nicely done.