what the hell is the matter with you?

hahah this is not a story this is about somebody

I like it!

why would you give yourself 1 star
thats sad..

Why is the arrow used for stabbing rather than shooting?

“sorry like an angel” and then he comes back and shoots me with an arrow.
^ fav line.
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lil grammar/spelling editing needed, but what story doesn’t need it?

Kind of interesting, really – I like how you don’t lean on too many adjectives & adverbs. You should expand it though… Good work.

Thank you all so much! But, White Hat I guess I just wrote it like that. Some people just do it like that.