haha i love the ferris wheel. my mom’s afraid of it though, and passed it on to my youngest brother. i think it’s awesome though. =D

this is cool, soo true

I really like the choppy sort of rhythm to this…it seemed to fit pretty well…maybe choppy isn’t the word so much as fragmented…I really like this! Nice writing!

So true.

I like it. It’s almost like a poem, but not quite. It’s an odd sort of writing style, but one that I admire nonetheless.

very true, i can’t hack riding the double ferris wheel anymore. . . lol. loved your approach & writing style in this piece