Haha, the last line is great. Great descriptions and perspective here; it makes us look at exactly how you felt.

This is so witty it hurts. The narration reminded me of Wes Anderson’s films, “Rushmore” in particular.

I loved this. I think you should read more. I really wanted it to continue. Great work!

Oops I mean “write” more instead of “read” more of course…. : )

ahaha yoda
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hahahaha i loved the last line =D