The last line is really funny…but the rest of it is just awful (in a good way—good writing, awful that he would do that). This is very intriguing…I hope you maybe do a sequel!
he he he love these storiesthey’er my kind of stories
That’s sad…And thusly very well written.Very good. :)
i don’t agree maybe cause i’m old
Blondie, I’m confused. You don’t agree with the story, one of the comments, or with the author’s use of decent grammar and spelling? Ben, very nicely written. The last line gives me a mental picture of the skinny guy from Ratatuille with a rifle.
Blondie, I’m confused. You don’t agree with the story, one of the comments, or with the author’s use of decent grammar and spelling?
Ben, very nicely written. The last line gives me a mental picture of the skinny guy from Ratatuille with a rifle.
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