this is aaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnggggggg! wow that took up alot of space. anyways:”string of pearls that lied around. . .” makes no sense(no offense or anything” you might wanna change that. this is the longest comment i’ve ever wrote! COOL !

forgive my sucking at typing(i know i need to practice Mrs.D’Andrea

) sry, forgot to close parentheses( i think that;s how you spell it) oh and Mrs.D’Andrea is my computer teacher

I think it’s great! Oh, now I see what OMG was talking about, maybe use “lay” instead of “lied.” Other than that, great job!

I really like this story. The grandma knows that her end of this life is coming so she is passing the pearls (pieces of her life) down to the beloved granddaughter. So sweet and real!