oh, that was really exciting. Kudos for being very original = )

Thanks – bored tonight. Nuthin’ on TV so I thought I’d conjure up some Aztec mayhem here on ficlets. Gotta love this site – much better than the boob tube…

exciting (:

Very intense, though I got confused about there being two women and which was intended to be sacrificed. Did I miss something?

LoA

Fair enough critique THX 0477 . This is a snapshot midscene from the initial concept – maybe I should reintro. Tayanna (Atzi’s daughter) earlier in the story… Good