Um, kind of at a loss. I’m not sure the tone you’re going for, which I think is partly due to grammar or style stuff. At first I took it to be kind of creepy (you writing to me, as opposed to a loved one, since you staring at me, a complete stranger, would be creepy if I’d just woken up.). There’s space, so you could add a bit more that gives clues as to whom you are addressing maybe.
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