Interesting indeed. See, there’s a fine line between intriguing plot twist and confusing out-of-place-seeming turnaround. You’re dancing in the veil. I would like some clarification, because I’m confused. You make the reader believe Tom is being adressed, then change that reader’s mind, and then leave that reader in the dust confused. If that’s what you were aiming for, well done! For that, you get 4 stars.
Electagirl
Storykeeper of Fae