OK, this was a cool challenge. Writing only using dialogue is definitely a good way to improve on your skills. Let me know what you think.

That was fun to do, though I may have gone a bit too far with my twist ending.

LoA

Hmm… if I can think of a twist I like, I’m in. This sounds like fun, and I’ve enjoyed reading everyone else’s entries so far.

Good challenge!

Thanks to everyone who participated! I’ll post the winner here soon…

Alright, many congratulations all around for a stellar turnout in this challenge! I was blown away by some astounding twists! And now, the winners…

Honorable Mention: Pop Bottle Pete Loves Big Ida by YodaOnCrack
3rd Place: You Always Miss Your Brother by pie_is_good
2nd Place: Abduction by Nick
1st Place: The Dungeon of My Discontent by Batak Beatrix
Be sure and congratulate our winners, they really pulled out all the stops for this one!

“Yo, Petey, go out and be a good kid and shoot some hoops for a minute! Big Ida got somebody impotent to talk to, yeah, uh-uh, o.k….. Hey Useless – private me when you gonna pay out my prize money.”

Uhm hmm… about that… Did I mention I’m broke? Ida? IDA ?! YOU ’RE HURTING ME !! PUT ME DOWN RIGHT NOW AND … UM… I’LL GIVE YOU A PEPSI !! Please?

noooo im tooo late…..noooooooo ; (

It was a very brief time period for this one, mainly because I didn’t want to have to judge a thousand entries. ;-) However, in just four more ficlets (which could come very soon) I’ll be at 100 and ready to host another challenge. It will also be a fast one. Keep your eyes peeled!