The idea is, there is something very screwy going on here, with Kathy messing with DNA test results, and preying on a unique family story for fame.

I’m so confused. Something isn’t possible there, though I’m so confused I’m not sure what. Amusing rendition of a Maury Povich Show sort of moment.

LoA

Yeah, I gotta agree with THX 0477 — confused I am. Your comment helped clear it up, but that idea doesn’t really come across in the tale. Solid idea, though…

OMG ! Totally confused. Is that possible? You must keep that going….sum how….

I’m not supposed to sequel! Although I’d like to continue to clear up the mystery…

Mostly, I think I’ll fix the line confirming their identicality.

Be a rule breaker, Mistress Elsha Hawk. You’re not supposed to sequel and that means sequels won’t be included in the “judging,” but I think you can do it…

Nick’s right, by all means continue the story! But I’ll just judge this one. :-)

I really like the idea you had with this one, but the execution could use a little work. Thank you for writing the sequel to explain what happened! It really is a great twist and with a little work it could be an amazing shocker! Thanks for entering my challenge!