Ah, what kid in school hasn’t thought about knocking down the school bully, eh? Well-written and very enjoyable.

This is excellent. I can’t stand a bully and unfortunately they are more numerous than people want to believe. I hear how “there is one in every crowd,” and sadly, there is oft times, “a crowd around every one.”

fantastic. a great plot, imbued with strong emotions, and well written at the same time.