Very well written – engaging, interesting, and great descriptions. – Yoda

it was fine i guess

welll…………….

it was a little borning tip make it exciting

I’m starting to see two things here…

1) You show significant talent and should definitely keep writing Ben!

2) Blondie Babe needs to get over her/his/it-self and find a new toy to play with because the vacuous comments not even remotely veiled show mountains of nothing more than immaturity and jealousy.

This I want to see more of!

Great sequel! Five stars for this also, though my stars aren’t working again. :(