Sweet depiction of a moment. My favorite part:
“Maybe she would step past
His clenched fist
Past his outstretched arm
And, no longer shy,
Kiss him
Feeling his pursed lips widen
Into a broad smile”

Very cute moment, and I like the pseudo-poem style to it (just meaning the non-rhyming aspect).

LoA

this is really sweet!
great job=]

You used my favorite word. bedgraggled!

A sweet story or young love/dating.