I’m slightly confused. They are obviously happy about the rain, and they dance together. Are they deaf? The rain is silent to them. Are they old? Two rockers, not conversing with each other, not kissing, tired after one dance…
The details are nice, but a backstory is missing. Prequel! Sequel!

I thought it was sweet, a sort of symphony of love captured in a moment, silent except for in their memories…or something suitably romantic and vague like that. That’s the beauty of fiction though—open to interpretation. Welcome to Ficlets!

LoA