Oooh…this is amazing! Really freaking amazing! I love the visual I got from the line, “Her hair shone like a flame as it fell in perfect ringlets around her shoulders.” That’s lovely imagery. And just the whole thing…wow.

I’m jealous of your writing like Alsadair was jealous of the other men touching his mistress, or morsel however you view her. I agree with someday about the imagery being particularly on point. NICE .