Very creepy. “Emerald eyes” is a good use of alliteration. My cat Patches is constantly fluffing her tail about so I know where you got that bit of description about the restless tail—probably a pet? Good story.

Well, you gotta know what I’ma say.

Read on to find out!

Decent imagery, but I’m not sure I understand the point of making her a catgirl.

It works better. Hm… why do I always have to ‘splain it when I use nekos?