The formatting commands got me when I first tried to use ‘em.

Interesting story, but I’m thinkin’ maybe a mature tag would be nice…
LoA

There you go…and please don’t take that in a mean way.

No, not at all! Thanks for doing that. This is a really neat story…I love the whole first paragraph. Awesome.
LoA

Okay, I feel retarded saying this, but what does LoA mean?

It means League of Awsomeness (yes, I agree with whatever your thinking right now, lol). read THX00 profile and it should explain well enough.

okay then. so i take it the story was okay? or is that like a club or something? nevermind, not gonna worry about it.