lolololololololololololololololololol!
this is throw-your-head-back-and-laugh hilarious!
awesome job!!!!

WTF (in a good way). This IS funny. Definately off beat humor and chancy, but original. The thoughts of the main character are so ridiculous it made me shake my head at first, and then a low rumbling chuckle became laughter by the end. Where did you get the mental image of some stumbling goofball simultaneously irritated and intent on biting someone? Also, thoughts of characters aren’t put in quotation marks they are italicized, I’m pretty sure I’m right about that but double-check to be sure.

I was chatting with one of my friends a few months ago, trying to come up with a movie plot. a zombie story could be cool, I thought to myself. So we tossed the idea around of zombie motivation—what if zombies are not mindless but instead had some motivation? In that case, what would it be? In all the zombie movies, people can walk like zombies and not piss them off. If they start talking, though, the zombies go after them. So zombies must be irritated by the sound of people’s voices. Really irritated.

this is funny! and some ppl usually have irritating voices..i know a few myself..uggh it just makes u want to “bite” them lol.. i’m expecting a sequel..(and btw about my story..yeah it is good to know that guys think that way too..i just think everyone is complicated regardless of gender lol..)

I now have to urge to bite someone. Very funny thoughts from the zombie.

Haha, very funny. Everybody can use a zombie-apocalypse story.

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