Comments on Things to Do on the Edge of a Building by Eckhouse

Blusparrow

wow
looks like a good story starter! keep it going!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:03:28.
someday_93

This is awesome…I thought maybe suicide at first, and then the last line…wow. Really, really great writing! I agree with Bluesparrow, you could make a whole story out of it if you want, or just leave it at this. Both ways, amazing.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:03:28.
Storykeeper of Fae

WOW ! AMAZING ! I didn’t see the ending coming, you had me agape with awe with the line about equilibrium and adrenaline. Goosebumps, man! This is the best ficlet I’ve read in a while!

LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:03:28.
uselessness

Agreed, this was a great read! Very well done. I was so inspired, I wrote a sequel. :-)
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:03:28.
RunningWithScissors

woah! 80 floorss!! dudee thatd be one button filled elevator. ;]
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:03:28.