I liked this. However, somehow the tense seems wrong here. I think it would have been better in the present tense rather than past tense.

Dude, I wrote this? Ficlets are wierd, I forget what I write.

I agree, present tense could improve it. Feel free to continue it in present tense, then I may continue yours. Who needs to be tied by tense in ficlets anyway! ;)

Thanks for the comment.