You’ve captured both the voice and the personality of Simon, no small feat in 1,024 characters! I think this is your first addition to the series. Welcome to the team! :-)

Hahaha…velociraptors…

Awesome.

Excellent work, Fyora. Keep carrying the mini-Earth torch!

Simon must have forgotten that before the Fall, dinosaurs were vegetarians!

Sorry, couldn’t resist. I tried to give you five stars, but whenever I did, I got taken to the ficlets version of a 404 screen—”Ouch that hurt! Try the main page! Wah-wah-wahhhn!”

Wait—my five stars showed up in my review! Yay! Except, what the hell is wrong with this site?

haha, amazing.

Lovely Firefly reference! And great addition! =]

Oh my gosh. Firefly and Battlestar Galactica references together! Marvelous! I particularily like the bit with human and velociraptors.

Absolutely wonderful! This should be an intro to a cool new video game where I can create my own world, populated by demons, velociraptors, and other mean and nasties that could eat the general population. What fun!

@Lady Scapegrace:
I think I now know how William Golding felt.

Remember when you entered my Halloween Challenge? The Vodcast is still posted at yodaoncrack.blogspot.com – watch the 1st round videos at the bottom of the page – it’s at the end. When I read your entry, I remembered feeling (as I read it) that I had been transported about 83 million years back. Great talent here. You are unique – as yuu’ve said in your profile… I’m almost on 200 ficlets. Hope you enter my 200 ficlet challenge!

I really liked the piece. It shows how important proper planning is.