aww, sweet. I like how you made her a foster child, put her in a good place, with good people. My favorite line: “She’s so young, and yet she’s left no doors open.”

aww it’s so sweet yet so sad.

aww the little teddie

I’m sure Mellie will have a good life from this point on. Here I am thinking she’s real—most definately someone like her exists somewhere out there, so lets hope that someone is as lucky. Good writing.

Absolutely she’s real, Tad. Absolutely.

awwww

that’s so sweet. i loved how you made the prequel into a real story. both are bittersweet. nice job. and i liked how you said, “Absolutely she’s real.” even though it was just a comment it really makes you think.

~e

This is hopeful and heartbreaking at the same time… There are too many people out there with lives like Mellie’s.