Ooh…I really like this. It almost reminds me of the ballroom scene in the movie version of Romeo and Juliet, but not quite. The ending is perfect.

Oh oh! Do go on!
I very much like the tone of this, and I love the idea of this, please go on.

This is neat. I’m interested to see if it will continue?

wonderful

…a smile that eclipsed the gala in such radiance that I shall always mourn its waning…

I love that phrase. Very nicely done.

So awesome. I really, really am in need of a sequel for this!

The ending is spot-on. Nicely done.

Nice! Almost haunting!

Absolutely beautiful. Just like when I met the first love of my life…except we did talk and we weren’t married lol.
Gorgeous: absolutely in need of a sequel.