Oh, I love it. It’s written in such a matter-of-fact way, like someone explaining how this man lived without hardly caring and yet it manages to be completely heartbreaking. Good job.

I love how you continued your experiment in Point-of-Views. This sounds like it was told from the POV of the village gossip, and that’s perfect after seeing it from “the gods’ ” perspective.
Thank you for the sequel. :D

THE * experiment in Point of Views.

My mistake. :D

This is really good. It interests me to know where this is going exactly.

Magnificent! Wonderfully written. I’m starting to feel really sorry for this poor gentleman I have helped to create.