That was jaw-dropping. It took me a bit after I finished reading to realize what had actually happened, and my mouth actually hung open for a bit. In my opinion, at least for this subject, that makes it REALLY good writing.
Oh my god! It took me a moment, but then I got it and then, wow. At first I was thinking, hospital or something…my god. Great writing, scary, powerful. LoA
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