Hmm. I like the simplicity, imagery, and figuritive language, but the idea of molding a person into something else…unless of course he is the potter and you are the wheel, does not sit well with me morally.

Wonderful poem, though.

thanks for the honesty,
I appreciate it.
This was actually a poem from 4 years ago and was based on events in my life. I agree with you, people can’t and shouldn’t be molded or made into something by another person – it didn’t work out well for me either, in fact, it sort of back-fired.