I like the ending: “I’m in a race against time, and it’s already at the finish line.
And I still haven’t started running.”

Sounds like a nightmare, trapped in an hourglass…

I agree with Mistress Elsha Hawk, I absolutely love the ending!
LoA

can I agree three? I love the ending also! I made me think of the song that goes life’s like an hourglass, glued to the table no one can find the rewind button, girl. I love that song!

omg breathe by anna nalick! i love that song too, and i love this story, amazing =)

I love that song too! And this story!

Very clausterphobic, and a nice sense of urgency.