haha, cliffhanger. I have a few things I must say though: 1: Her name is Katherine, the boot camp man said it. 2: It is written in 1st person, from Alana’s Point of View. The point of view change kinda messed with my head.
You are absolutely correct Fyora. I kinda made it my own, I hope that isn’t poor ficlet etiquette. I won’t leave it hanging for long, the thing is I’m at work at the moment and I don’t have a ton of opportunities to flip open my lap top and churn out a bunch of stories.
and further more, it didn’t seem to me that slave girl was called katherine—I thought the boot camp guy yelled to his superior to come over and the superiors name was Katherine. So, only MBTM knows, but that was my interpretation.
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