You did a good job with the dialog, at the same time I feel there’s room for improvement. Adding personality quirks and/or character habits into the conversations will help to bring them to life

An enjoyable read and an interesting viewpoint of future marriages. Good Job : )

Great stuff – I liked the names you’ve used!
- Yoda

an oversized ipod was nice description. Wirehead doesn’t strike me as a very nice name, but that’s what makes it funny so you can’t get rid of it.

iBod! HAHA ! I’m still laughing!

I love the last line…the whole thing is awesome.

The last line was a nice interjection of sterility into a touching moment, kind of highlighting that there is already an aspect of the sterile in the interaction. Did that make sense? Too philosophical? I also liked the robots little intentional slip of the tongue to make a more emphatic point, iPod for iBod.
LoA

iBod.
Very nice.