I swore so I thought it should be mature.

Ahhhh! I love this!!!! Write a sequel… soon!! poetic with drama!! haaa. :p

wow. a sequel would be great so we can get more of the storyline. love it!

thts kinda harsh and umm…

-She knows shes changed
-No ’s on the shes unless its “she is”
-Then an ass not a @$$ (hope it shows so i wrote it both ways)

i know where your coming from.
believe me.

i like this a lot, its probably the first poem ive ever read that had drama in it. 5stars!

i really liked it! you did a really good job!