I don’t think it’s really a rap but it came out better than I’d hoped, though it doesn’t have my name in it because…I just don’t like using it.

peace. everybody expects rap to end with peace.
sigh.
oh stereotypes.
=]

I liked it – you “represented” well here. Peace!

Her thoughts are out – side the box.
She might be crazy – like a fox.

Incredible line.

Who ever told you that you can’t rhyme needs to get smacked upside their head with this poem—even if it was you. But don’t hurt yourself. Loved this!