[shudder]

Good.

It’s weird to say he’s lucky, but having thoughts in a coma kinda gives me the feeling that he’ll recover. I didn’t know until the end what was really going on so good suspense.

Yeah, I agree with Tad, the thoughts in the coma make it seem sort of hopeful, but then I guess we really don’t know if people really think in a coma at all…I really like this, though, really nice writing. I love the line, So bright I can’t see anything- what an oxymoron. That’s awesome.
LoA