Nice twist. 0.o

I think you gave thought to how your characters speak. Susan (subtly) expressed herself with more simplistic words whereas Margaret, the professional therapist, speaks with a better range of vocabulary—I appreciate the dialogue a lot because it explains how different these people are, and at the same time they are both murderers. Really cool story.

I agree with Tad, he said it all. This is great, and the dialog is perfect.
LoA

Neat story idea, the hypocritical therapist. I’m such a sucker for psychological stuff. The only problem I had was it took me two or three reads to figure out who was talking when. But then again, I did just take a lot of cold medicine.
LoA

HA!!! I LIKE THIS ONE !!!!!!
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