Comments on Redefinition of "Ever" by The Lady

Ben Paddon

Incredible.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:05:38.
BARomero

This is a well done little moment. Good job!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:05:38.
uselessness

It’s a nice little vignette, and then, as suddenly as it came, it’s gone. It’d make a good prologue for a memoir, I think.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:05:38.
White Hat

I’m not sure I agree. It’s got more the quality of a haiku. Fragile in its brevity. With more added, it might lose that snapshot-ness that makes it so appealing.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:05:38.
Saint Chuck

This made me sad, it reminds me of all of the friends I had to leave behind. Great story, just disregard me.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:05:39.
TrickyDevil

wow. great story. i want to know more!!!! what happened 5 years ago? how did they become friends?
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:05:39.
THX 0477

Very nice, as everyone has said. I liked how I was wondering what the crap the title was all about right up until the end, and then BAM , oh, I get it. How nice.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:05:39.