This ficlet is a tad confusing. Was it a dream? Is Veronica a little girl, or not. You threw me off when she swore at her mom.

Veronica is a young girl around 13 in my mind.
If its a dream or not is for you to decide it makes our mind kind of wonder kind of like a hidden cliff hanger. If i write another sequal youll figure out though lol

Yeah, a bit confusing, but awesome all the same! This is really great—although it’s kind of awful to imagine a mother doing a thing like that to her child! Just awful. Poor Veronica! I’d like to find out what happens next, whether Veronica will live or if Mommy gets help for her issues, which clearly she has…
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Its a bit confusing but im trying to make it that way so it gets people to sort of wonder. I think I’ll write a sequal. :]

Yeah, that works, letting people wonder…I really like it. Cool, I can’t wait to find out what happens next!
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wat a heartless mother… i wonder wat happens now