Hey there! Want to know what happens next? So do I. Why don’t you write a sequel Ficlet and keep the story going?

I rated this 3 stars cause I need resolution. Does someone blow her out of the airlock? Does she McGuyver a decompression suit? (and btw, not clever enough myself to write a sequel)

Oooooo intriguing! Many many ideas but I doubt I will get/make time to write anything…

Heh, dirty deeds are afoot. Hmm wonder if that pun was intended.

:)

S.j.

Fun :) But the joke about rocket science was a little lame ;) But I enjoyed the story anyway.

A great start with an added twist. A feeling of ‘The Cold Equations”

This is hilarious! I loved it. Nice one!

Freaking funny, but your ending(?) killed the fifth star I was going to give you. Did a double-take, thought the guy was sending him into deep space. Then it hit me – oh, he’s locked him in, kinda the way you lock your siblings into the bathroom. Wasn’t quite the bang (or maybe the whoosh) I’d expected.

Very engaging dialogue.