I’m really looking forward to what you have planned to shock the narrator the next morning.
I’ve just realized though, that I don’t know the gender of the narrator?
So far, that’s my only complaint. :)

Who says I have anything planned? Maybe I’m just leaving a good hook for someone else to continue it.

(Geez, I can’t write everything by myself here. If I were going to do that I’d go somewhere like writing.com where I didn’t have the length limitations.)

As to the gender of the narrator, well, there’s certainly room for people to take it either way. :)

Very interested to see where it goes, but why does the waiter bring the check and the waitress answer the question?

Because I didn’t proofread well enough. Fixed.

Did he like eat her???

yes kermit, he ate her…. At least that is what I got.
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Wait a second, I thought this was a teenager!
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All right, I’ll confess.

When I was writing the original sequel, and all its followons, I somehow missed the line about ”’rents” in the original. In fact I only noticed it a couple of days ago. Oops.

If necessary, I suppose I could simply write another prequel ficlet in which he’s a young adult stockbroker, and confuse everyone even more. But I decided to just play it as it lay.

so.. eating waitresses is a common occurance. that’s like.. whoa. =]
omg. the gender comment above creeped me out. this had better not be a girl!XP

yeh, this is a good hook,, but I hope the parents didnt find out about how much his appetizer was…!

This is a cool series. I can’t believe he ate her!

alright. I’m off to read the sequel…
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I’m intrigued.