Wow. That’s awesome. What a great description of such a vivid color. You really captured its essence. And I loved how you wound in the bit about your Grandpa. If this is true, I’m so sorry for you. I loved the last line—what a great simile. Awesome entry.

that was great. it showed a lot of emotion, and I thought that made it better. great job

This is really great. I wish mine would express such deep emotion thru the writings of my, Bri-on’s, mind. Great descriptive words to express the essence of the color. Red is a wonderful color. =) Good Job!!

‘oozing’, that has to be one of my favorite words. You made this a very heartfelt piece by mentioning your Grandpa. He sounds like a wonderful grandparent. :D This is a good way to honor his memory.