True story, we are still waiting to find out what the results are of the accident. Hopefully she will be alright.

A very good job conveying the emotion of the scene. I really felt for the dog (and I’m not even an animal person) and for the person watching it all helplessly. You have a few instances of switching tenses, which is a big writing no-no and distracting.
LoA

I think I fixed all the tense issues, thanks for the constructive criticism THX 0477 .