Wow. You are a fantastic writer. What a great entry—some mystery and suspense…this is awesome. :]

Interesting choice of shape -dog. I like the man being immaculately dressed, I picture vampires that way, aristocratic. And I love the last line! what a perfect ending!

woah. fantastic!
not yet feeling ecstasy.. hmm perhaps someone’s thristy. ;]

Great job capturing that old school, gothic (in the old sense, not the new fashion-challenged, eyeliner over-indulging sense) style of the vampire legend.
LoA

ah,yes yes this is perfect

that’s a really kewl Vampire story. last line was awesome.

Not your run-of-the-mill vampire story. I love the imagery, especially “the mangy gray dog” coming out of the fog.