Great story idea with a lot of possible twists and turns and points of view. I loved the idea of the simple-minded (my read on the character) knight inspecting himself in front of the mirror.
LoA

hmm. great introduction—id like to read more.
“let me fall into detail” ++pretty line. :]

I like this… I liked that you didn’t reveal the vampire’s gender until the sixth paragraph, nor the narrator’s at all. Lends some nice ambiguity that could be taken in a lot of different directions.

Such confliction!